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Lackadaisy Cutthroat by tracyjb Lackadaisy Cutthroat by tracyjb
Two new pages. A lot of dialogue this time - hopefully not a tiresome amount. I prefer to adhere more to 'show, don't tell' as a storytelling method, but sometimes I suppose talk is necessary too.
This underwent -a lot- of revising. I'm not thrilled with it still, but there's a certain amount of catharsis involved in finally posting it. I look forward to working on the next few pages.

Characters Asa, Mordecai, Avril, Nico and Serafine (the Savoys)

As a side notes:
'nut zippers' may sound like a painful pants-related issue, but it actually refers to an old-fashioned type of candy.
Thanks to :iconjackalsgrin: for naming the character in Asa's terrible joke.

As usual, these pages won't make an iota of sense without the prior pages. You can find them in order in the Archive
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thelordoftheforest Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The detail and quality of the strip is..*jaw drops*. At first, the Hatchet joke vaugely reminded me of the Noodle Incident in Calvin and Hobbes.
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Aturo Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The joke whith hatcheted up at the end xD
hillarious ^^
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insanitycookie333 Featured By Owner May 9, 2012
I SWEAR, every time Asa's mouth opens, I'm hearing John Goodman speak in my head. No idea why.

Love your cats by the way. So cute and expressive!
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1sthermit Featured By Owner May 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Well i thought it was quite good, especially the last line of clips. & i fee for you with the too much dialogue thing. Writing comics can get hard, especially when there's a storyline.
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Constance-fire Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
those siblings are plane evil
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Aprilequinox Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't know if I can really say anything except that I read through the entire story so far in the past two days and loved it to pieces.

And funny thing, my mom found some of those "Squirrel Nut Zippers" the other day and brought them home for me to try. I like them a lot - you're missing out, Mordecai.
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Ronp Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2008
Whoa pussycat with a BAR watch out!
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Hikari-of-Darkness Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2008
IAHSFJHLEUGLHLKAJH I love Lackadaisy!! Your expressions are great, and the story is so fun to read :heart:

but... what is the hatchet joke?
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tekena1200 Featured By Owner May 15, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
I have one picture of these two guys in a car with one freakin' out and the other says "DO IT FAGGOT" I know for a fact its from here but I'm not sure whether or not it was edited but it is hilarious

--I have it set as my ID on myspace account
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Hanada-chan Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2008
"nut zipper".......You must know a lot about the 1920's tracyjb-san! Well.....obviously.....you have to....
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